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YOU do indeed have a lot to work on here!
Please work your hardest to make up for this or I'll track you down and do something horrible...
Please, add voices, fix the sound, fix the story…come to think of it you’re probably going to have to start over. I don’t understand why everyone’s gone so easy on you. This was o.k. for a little school project but you should have fine-tuned it before putting it here. You never know what crazed Adams fan might become thirsty for your blood upon viewing…